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Feb Ad some feed back please |
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MR. STEAMER 
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 Topic: Feb Ad some feed back pleasePosted: 30/January/2006 at 9:32am |
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Just wondering what you guys think of this months Ad??? Things are stagnent on the forum...this will give you guys something to laugh about
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John L
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Posted: 30/January/2006 at 3:50pm |
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Looks good..... Let us know how it pulls...
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Posted: 30/January/2006 at 6:03pm |
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I don't see the 3 month after service guarantee we talked about......................... Looks good to me..........nice ad........not too much clutter. What you see is what you get kind of display, you have to have an eye catcher which you don't have.........the $ 60.00 /Blue background is not the promotion.........the Free Movie Passes are............That's what should be there instead. Divide that square into 4 & place the 4 most popular trailer pics in there..........that's the eye catcher.................. then they read the rest. Good luck Nghtrider Edited by nightrider |
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Posted: 30/January/2006 at 6:13pm |
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The 3 month service thing will start off in march.....yes its a good idea... thanks for the input |
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Mr.Mike
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Posted: 30/January/2006 at 7:12pm |
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Nice Ad Steamer... Have to agree with nightrider on this one. If the first thing I saw was Free Movie Passes I would tend to pay more attention and read further. |
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Posted: 30/January/2006 at 10:42pm |
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I like it.
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MR. STEAMER
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Posted: 31/January/2006 at 10:25am |
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the movie pass thing is an after thought.... 2 rooms for 60 is what I'm pushing... for the person who wants a quick spring clean up..... I'll make good money when I do a min now.....the movie passes are only there to get the customer to spend more.... I use them to get the extra gard or get the customer to add furniture or add carpet vise versa. Feb is a crap month...just wanted to create some excitement |
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Posted: 31/January/2006 at 11:38am |
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Looks good!
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Posted: 31/January/2006 at 12:50pm |
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It doesn't matter what you're pushing..........you have to get the readers attention and keep them involved in your ad. If you pick up a book the first thing you read is the cover................ If you pick up a cd, dvd or whatever..........you read the cover............... What makes you read a news story...............the cover....... where's your cover steamer.............THE MOVIE PASSES Don't worry they'll see the $ 60.00 Special, But that's not what they want................THEY WANT THE FREE MOVIE PASSES Give them what they want and the'll give you what you want Nightrider |
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Ed Valentine
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Posted: 31/January/2006 at 1:08pm |
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Steamer;
Ad looks very good. And, $60.00 (Canadian) sounds pretty darn inexpensive too. How does this cost compare in your area under normal conditions?
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Posted: 31/January/2006 at 5:59pm |
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Posted: 31/January/2006 at 7:00pm |
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Try it out ............if it works & helps you......Great...if not.........well you got sucked into his headline........everything always catches someone eye..........it all depends who's hungry enough to bite NIGHTRIDER Edited by nightrider |
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